Hey, can you correct my english topic?

change River Tiber to Tiber River. In English adjectives come first, like red dress or thin skin. Just 2,000 years. The number itself is better here. vast not vaste. Rome's history spans over 2,000 years, in which time it has transformed from a small latin village, to the center of a vast empire and finally to the capital that it is today. "who took care of them like his own sons. ...Roman's glory in many monuments. ...known as the Flavian Amphitheatre. Roman Coliseum is capitalized. It's a proper noun. It was an arena where slaves, prisoners, and Roman Gladiators fought to survive. Delete have you ever been there? Other monuments are the Roman Forum, the Pantheon and Trevi Fountain. Delete I really advise you to visit you. You can dine on delicious authentic ethnic food at the famous romantic restaurant Il Caminetto. At the Via del Corso, also known as Il Corso, you can shop to your hearts content. It also connects to the center of Rome the Piazza Venezia and the Piazza del Popolo. Stop here and don't mention Rome's deficits. It ends an upbeat paper on a negative note. Good luck with the paper. Study a little more on your English. You're doing a good job.